For this composition, I altered the dogs face so he would look at the audience. The previous angle I had him facing is repeated quite a bit in the story already, so this provides some variety.
I played around with the colours of the magnifying glass, to avoid it clashing with the moon. I also made the moon smaller, to help differentiate it a bit better.

I added motion lines to the tennis ball, to help provide a better understanding of the difference in gravity as stated by the text. I also changed the moon, replacing the rocks with craters so it looked more identifiable as a moon.
For this composition, I just moved the rocket and trail so they would not sit directly inline with the border, if the composition is squared.
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